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PostSubject: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeSat Jul 21, 2012 10:18 pm

I posted these a while back on CMR, but just thought I'd post 'em here for some more feedback. I didn't really know where else to put this thread. so please move it if it should be somewhere else.

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just would like to know what you all think:

Body of Christ
God is Sick

these are a couple of tracks I recorded in Aug. No bass atm.

I have a couple more that I recorded in Aug but I have to rewrite/rerecord the vocals for them... as well as a few more that I'm in the process of writing/recording.

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just "finished" another one.. though you must first pardon the fact that my timing is a little off on the stop/start.. and the lack of a guitar solo... I have, thus far, been unsuccessful at writing one for this song... if someone wants to give me some ideas or somethin.. more than welcome. And yes, I left the coke can opening for no reason.. maybe I should put it as the intro.. hmm...

i am not

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here's one of the other songs I did back in August. All I did was take the old vocal track off and put a new one of me reading Isaiah 53.

Isaiah

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another song I wrote years ago that I pulled out of the shelf and put to some drum loops. Don't think I'm gonna add vocals but I certainly would like to add some instrumentation (including violin) to the clean guitar parts...

Moral Decay

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here's another one I did back in August. All I did was take the old vocal track off and put a new one of some the "blessed" statements in Psalms (and in Matthew at end)

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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeSun Jul 22, 2012 9:54 am

I like the riffs. I think these need some work to be marketable, though. Can you take the spoken word parts, rework them into something rhyming more like typical song lyrics, and sing them? You need something to really break up the different parts of the song.

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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeSun Jul 22, 2012 12:58 pm

I'm not a vocalist and that's really the hardest part for me... that's why I really need someone to work with me lol ... these are really just rough drafts for the song ideas ... I think they would need some more depth in some of the guitars, something done with the drums (though compared to the other loops I've used these are good but it's always more of a finding a few loops I like and play the rhythm guitar part over it rather than something written together with the riff), as well as some bass added ... I would love someone to work with to flush out not only the rough ideas/songs I have but all these ideas and such I feel are in my head that I just don't know how to get out.

all these songs were recorded with Audacity and I have them all saved as Audacity files so all the tracks are removable/able to be edited, etc.

I'm not really interested in marketing anything. I just want to use the gifts that God has given me to glorify Him and to speak the messages that He gives me to speak. Anything I do will always be free download, at least from this perspective because I don't feel that God wants me in the music business in a full time sense... you know what I mean? Perhaps God has something in the future, but at the present time I just want to SERVE Him somehow with the gifts and talents He's given me (even though my talents are not up on par with a lot of other people's)... and I've always been interested in writing/recording music and I believe that's part of God's plan for me.. though I really don't know how/when...
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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeSun Jul 22, 2012 3:55 pm

Music sounds good to me. As Alldat said, they would benefit from them being sung as to being spoken. But they're still good anyway.

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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeSun Jul 22, 2012 9:33 pm

Quote :
I'm not really interested in marketing anything. I just want to use the
gifts that God has given me to glorify Him and to speak the messages
that He gives me to speak. Anything I do will always be free download,
at least from this perspective because I don't feel that God wants me in
the music business in a full time sense... you know what I mean?


Regardless of whether you want to sell your music or give it away, marketing is simply making a product (in this case a song) and getting someone to listen. To honor God, you want to make the best possible song you can so that people will want to hear it whether they pay to hear it or get it for free. That's all I meant by marketing.

I have sold CDs and have given away many more. I usually break even on printing costs--that's it. I just want this next project to be good enough that I COULD charge and make a profit regardless of whether the project sold a copy or not. I think that you would want to do the same.

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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeMon Jul 23, 2012 2:00 pm

I'm just thinking that if you get talking with bassdude, you could have bass and vocals. As to drummers, we have Sabidoo and Thomas, as far as I know.
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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeMon Jul 23, 2012 2:58 pm

I think doing anything making music would be fun.
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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeMon Jul 23, 2012 3:37 pm

I dig what I'm hearing. It would be great to hear you paired up with a decent singer, and some other band members.

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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeMon Jul 23, 2012 6:55 pm

what are you saying about my singing?!?!?
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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeMon Jul 23, 2012 7:05 pm

unworthy wrote:
what are you saying about my singing?!?!?

You were actually singing?....all I heard was talking.

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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeMon Jul 23, 2012 7:15 pm

yeah.. cause I'm an indecent singer lol
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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeMon Jul 23, 2012 8:10 pm

Same here… I could be a nice complement to a choir, but ask me to sing metal?
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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeMon Jul 23, 2012 9:02 pm

I can sing a some Jon, if you wanted me to try a track in the future. I'm no Michael Sweet or Guy Ritter, but I'm okay.
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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeMon Jul 23, 2012 10:22 pm

unworthy wrote:
yeah.. cause I'm an indecent singer lol




Indecent? Then put some pants on, you freak! lol!

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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeMon Jul 23, 2012 10:48 pm

unworthy wrote:
yeah.. cause I'm an indecent singer lol

If the shoe fit's...put it on! lol!

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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeTue Jul 24, 2012 1:39 am

lol!

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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeTue Jul 24, 2012 7:44 am

Staybrite wrote:
unworthy wrote:
yeah.. cause I'm an indecent singer lol

If the shoe fit's...put it on! lol!



I hope it's more than a shoe! affraid

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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeTue Jul 24, 2012 10:35 pm

didn't we have this discussion last week on the CMR? Razz

I started tracking bass on some of these in May, but the end of school got me really busy and now I'm going to start again.
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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeTue Jul 24, 2012 11:18 pm

maybe I'll look into actually writing lyrics for the ones that I just "plopped" some scriptures down on because I had to scrap the old lyrics.
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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 25, 2012 1:38 am

I like the music.
It would be great when someone could do the vocals for you.
then you don't have to sing and can concentrate more on the music.
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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 25, 2012 2:10 am

alldatndensum wrote:
unworthy wrote:
yeah.. cause I'm an indecent singer lol
Indecent? Then put some pants on, you freak! lol!
AAAaaahhh!!! affraid
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Seriously though, you never know until you try...
With a decent effort put forth, and with the right recording capabilities...
I mean hey, when I was young, I never thought I was a good singer at all...
Now... well, I think a few people somewhere out there kinda like what I do...
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So like I said, you never know 'til you give it a good try!


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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 25, 2012 9:40 am

I have a thrash song mostly recorded where I'm doing vocals… I just don't sound good, but I don't know any vocalists who'd be willing to do it.
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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeWed Aug 01, 2012 5:16 pm

I'd be WILLING, but...
a) I'm SO busy at the moment... need things to slow down...
b) My studio is not set up for vocals at the moment... at least, not LOUD vocals! Smile


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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeWed Aug 01, 2012 9:34 pm

danielbandfan wrote:
I have a thrash song mostly recorded where I'm doing vocals… I just don't sound good, but I don't know any vocalists who'd be willing to do it.

I'm not a great vocalist, but I can do a decent thrash sound. My recording equipment is pretty ghetto, but I'd take a shot at it if you want.
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PostSubject: Re: my songs   my songs I_icon_minitimeSat Aug 04, 2012 4:38 pm

Sure. Smile

This is the song. I used my own vocals as it's kind of a semi-rough mix. http://soundcloud.com/kompilesoft/warbound-war-for-peace
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