Back with another one to look for some feedback on. I'm using a different guitar tone and this time Jenny is on vocals and piano. I think this mix came out pretty good, but again my opinion is always biased.
https://soundcloud.com/user-717882623/forgiven
FORGIVEN
Verse 1:
The highway to Hell
The road most taken
Reached for my angel
The darkness faded
Chorus:
My heart is open
Power courses through my veins
I’m forgiven
I walk the valley
With everything to gain
No fears to weaken
I am forgiven
Verse 2:
Fire and brimstone
Now forgotten
Surrender the fight
And be delivered
Bridge:
I thought I was too far gone
Believing the Devil’s song
Snatched from a burning fate
By the gift the angel gave
Chains broken by your hand
You take in the guilty man
Now I rest in your embrace
Now I am forgiven
Chorus:
My heart is open
Power courses through my veins
I’m forgiven
I walk the valley
With everything to gain
No fears to weaken
I am forgiven
{solo}
Outro:
Chains broken by your hand
You take in the guilty man
Now I rest in your embrace
Now I am forgiven