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Tell me what you think, I have been working on this song, let me know if you have any different ideas that I could do with it.

Realize


Verse 1:
We are always falling down to the ground.
Cause we never bother to look around.

We’ve become so numb to this world.
Cause we never call to the name of the Lord.

Chorus:
Why is the world this way? So, filled with violence and pain?
It’s our own fault; we just stand around waiting for rain.

Verse 2:
If we as Christians say we're doing what God wants us to do.
If we are being the light we’re supposed to be, then why do we live this way?

Bridge:
Oh why, why can’t we just realize what this world has come to?
Why can’t we just realize all the wrong things we do?
Oh, why don’t you realize that God is the only Savior to this world, why don’t you turn to Him and give Him your life?
He is the only one that will ever save you, so just turn to Him.

Chorus 2:
Why is this world this way? So, filled with violence and pain?
It’s our own fault, cause we know Jesus is the way.[/center][/center]

Sounds great so far. I'm not much of a lyric writer, maybe Alldat or Fundy will give you some advice.

Good lyrics you have written drumdude.
At one day I hope to listen top this song with music.

When you have time, we can go over these a bit and tweak them for meter issues (flow of the lyrics) and maybe go over some rhyming words that can help you rewrite a couple of lines and still keep your original thoughts.

1. Why did you write a song about me? I'll expect royalties.

2. Who typed the words for you? I say this because words are spelled correctly.

3. What Alldat said.


On a side note: I once wrote a little ditty called "Porch Monkey." I would be glad to post the lyrics.....if Alldat says it's ok.

Sorry no royalties for you sabidoo, and I wrote it all out and spelled it my self, and alldat is working on re-doing it and still keeping the same meaning.

Drumdude the words you have chosen and your spelling are perfect.
You did a good job.
I hope you get music for this song.
I would love to hear this song when it's done.
Are this the first lyrics you have written?

Yes, this is the first song I have written.
And my hope is when Alldat is done working on it that he can put music to it.
And thank you all!